Sela Locke

His name was Thomas. We caught each other’s eyes in the halls sometimes between classes, and he always smiled and tripped over his feet when he saw me. What was ...

I don't know where you're getting your statistics. This isn't a personal affront or anything like that--but this was terrible . I mean, you switched tenses, you used 'poignant' and ...

I don't have a lot of time, so let's just get this over with, shall we? I'm not going to nitpick, though for a fourteen-year-old your grammar/spelling wasn't bad at ...

Yay! I'm going to do a really big review for you! Dance for joy--I rarely do such things anymore. Got too much else t'do. You're getting a Sela-Attack. ;-D I ...

Ahh, well. I did , I admit, like part of the description here. It's real, it seems as though perhaps you've had a real-life experience along these lines, yes? Either ...

As a skeleton, a simple plot line, it was nice. However, I think you had a little trouble putting your thoughts down on the page--there were oodles and oodles of ...

It was warm that night. Warm so the sweat dripped offa you, warm so your insides boiled like Mama’s pot on the fire. The blinds had all been shut, and ...

Dang, where to start... You need to work on your punctuation and grammar, first. You hardly ever put question marks in where they should be, you mix up there/their/they're, and ...

Ridiculous parody-fanfic of Twi-obsessed fangirl. I wrote about a year ago, when I was still into hating Twilight and everything to do with it. I don't really need reviews, but ...

Fourth installment. No nitpicks please! Maybe it was hours later, our minutes, or a whole year, but finally, the sound of a book shutting snapped me out of my self-pitying ...

Miss Em, allow me to be honest, please? It's called being harsh . As you can see multiple times during my review, I say that I know that I'm not ...

Okay, so I'm trying to be very honest, right? And this is what happens. I've read the majority of this story. The characters are, for the most part, normal. Ridiculously, ...

I had a sudden inspiration the other day, in the form of an amazing character in a not-so-amazing movie. Anyone heard of Mr. Teatime? Well he reminded me of paper-ink-man, ...

It's E for now, but I might change the rating if things get dicey, later. No nitpicks please--this chapter's a bit rough, and I haven't decided yet if I want ...

The other guys got the nitpicks, so I'm just here to say What the heck was that? The funny thing is, I've done almost this exact same thing myself. A ...